3 thoughts on “Very unusual

  1. Green adults! A great plot and 100 wc entry.
    Think about how you could use commas and other punctuation to create further clarity in your writing.
    Keep up the great creative writing.

  2. A great idea! I wouldn’t like if I had turned green though! Lovely use of subordinate clauses to create complex sentences. Keep it up Jessica!

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