I like this story because at first it seems sad and then all of a sudden you see the hamster again, just it’s a zombie. I also like the way there is a cliffhanger Reply ↓
I realy like how theres a clifhanger , and how the hamster is a zombie. Do you not get nightmares? Reply ↓
This was so good I like how it said Who would help me?! That sentence adds suspense which is good seeing as the hamster is a Zombie. Reply ↓
I have a hamster i hope my hamster is not in the cupboard great story i’m sure you put a lot of effort into this piece of work I loved the cliffhanger as well. Keep up the good work Abigail!! Reply ↓
I like this story because at first it seems sad and then all of a sudden you see the hamster again, just it’s a zombie.
I also like the way there is a cliffhanger
I agree Joshua, a brilliant cliffhanger. I’m glad I don’t have a hamster!
I realy like how theres a clifhanger , and how the hamster is a zombie. Do you not get nightmares?
This was so good I like how it said Who would help me?! That sentence adds suspense which is good seeing as the hamster is a Zombie.
I have a hamster i hope my hamster is not in the cupboard great story i’m sure you put a lot of effort into this piece of work
I loved the cliffhanger as well. Keep up the good work Abigail!!